圖解英文寫作的要素
- 作者:吳宜錚,Chris Jones
- 出版社:懶鬼子英日語
- 出版日期:2013-10-30
- 語言:繁體中文
- ISBN10:9865927500
- ISBN13:9789865927509
- 裝訂:平裝 / 304頁 / 17 x 23 cm / 普通級 / 雙色印刷 / 初版
Ch3 建構文章的梁柱-段落!
13 加上細節,讓段落更豐富!
(描述細節的方法)
Warm-up 課前預習
英文寫作要拿高分,絕不能只輕描淡寫地描述問題表面,一定要深入描述細節、闡明情感與影響。如果寫作的題目為「從事球類運動的經驗」,就必須詳細描述整個運動進行的地點、方式與程序等,還要說明從事該運動的原因以及產生的影響,像是獲得球友的支持、壓力的抒解等,都必須鉅細靡遺地寫出來。
看看以下段落:
Basketball is popular and I love playing it. I have not played basketball for a long time but I am good at it. I always have fun. It is the best sport for me to relax.
籃球很受歡迎,我喜歡打籃球。我的球齡不久,但是我很擅長。我一直覺得很有趣。籃球是最能讓我放鬆的運動。
這個段落的主題雖然清楚,邏輯也說得過去,但是在細節的描述上卻完全缺乏,如果加上細節部分,會是更出色的段落:
Basketball is very popular in every country around the world. I am no exception; I love playing basketball. Since everyone knows how to play basketball and the rules to play are simple. I
have not played basketball for a long time, but I am good at it. I always have fun when playing basketball since I am able to meet people with similar ideas and interests. With a ball and a
basketball court, indoors or outdoors, I can play either alone or with others; it is the best sport for me to relax